Feedback On Recipe Website, 10/23

Recipe Website By Priya Kral

Feedback from Alex K.

• Header is not centered in the space.
• Watch out for orphan, left align the intro paragraph.
• Optically align the boxes because the drop shadow makes it look bigger — add the y drop of the drop shadow to the bottom margin.
• Drop shadow makes it look like buttons.
• Line break shouldn’t happen after ingredients header.
• Overall, optically center things and/or get rid of button look; redistribute breaks to put under the copy.

Feedback from Griffin O.

• Get rid of drop shadow.
• Break should be below content.
• Breaks maybe should sandwich the whole element.
• Typesetting and typeface choices are good.
• Hierarchy of lines should be resolved.
• More pictures not necessary.

How I Will Implement Feedback

• I will focus more on margins and inspect the elements to make sure that there are no overlapping margins.
• I will change the positioning of the line breaks so that the hierarchy of content is clear.
• I will be more cognizant of how my headers look and tweak the drop shadow so it does not look like a button.